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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this grammatically correct?

Please find the comments from the client as in the attached delivery note which is self explanatory for the rejection of the item on line # 5.
  

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Hi, Please find the comments from the client as in the attached delivery note which is self explanatory for the rejection of the item on line # 5. Please find the comments from the client in the attached delivery note , which is self - explanatory for the rejection of the item on line # 5. I find this wording a bit awkward.

— Clive

  • Hi, Please find the comments from the client as in the attached delivery note which is self explanatory for the rejection of the item on line # 5.
  • Please find the comments from the client in the attached delivery note , which is self - explanatory for the rejection of the item on line # 5.
  • I find this wording a bit awkward.
  • It also suggests that you have already mentioned this matter to the reader in a general way.
  • I assume that you have.
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Hi,

Please find the comments from the client as in the attached delivery note which is self explanatory for the rejection of the item on line # 5.

Please find the comments from the client in the attached delivery note, which is sel
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Thank you for your help to fix the errors in my sentence.

How can I avoid awkward from my sentence. I have alreday informed the reader about this matter officially, but also, I need to inform him the written comments received from the client.
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Hi,

eg
As we discussed earlier, the client rejected an item.Please refer to line 5 of the attached delivery note for his comments.

Clive
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