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Pawan24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Is this grammatically correct?

You left the conversation at critical point. I guess, you had problem with your internet connection. Well, I am seriously looking for a job in India. The reason being, I have realized that I cannot live a contented life far away from home. "Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it." I have seen both the sides of the coin and have concluded that India is the right place for me.
Coming back to the main point, yes please do let me know about the job profile and how I can apply for the particular job. My only motto of visiting India in December is to find one satisfactory job.
  

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I have underlined some small problem areas: You left the conversation at critical point. I guess, you had problem with your internet connection. Well, I am seriously looking for a job in India.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some small problem areas: You left the conversation at critical point.
  • I guess, you had problem with your internet connection.
  • Well, I am seriously looking for a job in India.
  • The reason being, I have realized that I cannot live a contented life far away from home.
  • " I have seen both the sides of the coin and have concluded that India is the right place for me.
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I have underlined some small problem areas:

You left the conversation at critical point. I guess, you had problem with your internet connection. Well, I am seriously looking for a job in India. The reason being, I have realized that I cannot live a contented life far away from home. "Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it." I have seen both the
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You had left the conversation at critical point. I guess, internet connection at your end was weak. Well, I am looking for a job in India. I have realized that I cannot live a contented life far away from home. "Everything has its beauty, but not everyone sees it." I have seen both sides of the coin and have concluded that India is the right place for me.
So, please do let me know about the j
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You seem to have made other changes also. I have underlined the remaining problems:

You had left the conversation at critical point. I guess, internet connection at your end was weak. Well, I am looking for a job in India. I have realized that I cannot live a contented life far away from home. "Everything has its beauty, but not everyone sees it." I have see
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thank you for a prompt reply. I appreciate your help.
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