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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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IS this grammatically correct?
Please check this out for me, thank you!
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase orders we given to ABC company included below Phoebe's said. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our PO number xxxx.
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase orders we given to ABC company included below Phoebe's said. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our PO number xxxx.
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Hi, Please check this out for me, thank you! yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase orders we given to ABC company included below Phoebe's said . 5, this is our PO number ***.
- Hi, Please check this out for me, thank you!
- yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase orders we given to ABC company included below Phoebe's said .
- 5, this is our PO number ***.
- No, there are lots of grammar problems and the meaning is almost impossible to understand.
- For a start, please clarify the phrases in red by trying to say them in another way.
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Hi,
Please check this out for me, thank you!
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase orders we given to ABC company included below Phoebe's said. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our PO number ***.
Please check this out for me, thank you!
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase orders we given to ABC company included below Phoebe's said. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our PO number ***.
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CliveHi,
Please check this out for me, thank you!
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase orders we given to ABC company included below Phoebe's said. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our
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Hi,
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase price we given to ABC company included below purchase order as Phoebe's mentioned. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our PO number ***.
A little better, but it's still pretty hard to understand.
Yes, the unit price is US$
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase price we given to ABC company included below purchase order as Phoebe's mentioned. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our PO number ***.
A little better, but it's still pretty hard to understand.
Yes, the unit price is US$
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CliveHi,
yes, the unit price is USD8/pc, for all the purchase price we given to ABC company included below purchase order as Phoebe's mentioned. But only 5000pcs inspected goods were changed the AQL range to 1.5/2.5, this is our PO number ***.
A little better, but it's still pretty hard to understand.
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Hi,
A bit better, but I still have to guess at the meaning of parts of it. Maybe this.
Yes, the unit price is US$8/pc, for all our purchase orders to ABC company, which also include the PO below as Phoebe has mentioned. But only the last order (PO ***) of 5000pcs goods was inspected, and we changed the AQL to 1.5/2.5.
Clive
A bit better, but I still have to guess at the meaning of parts of it. Maybe this.
Yes, the unit price is US$8/pc, for all our purchase orders to ABC company, which also include the PO below as Phoebe has mentioned. But only the last order (PO ***) of 5000pcs goods was inspected, and we changed the AQL to 1.5/2.5.
Clive
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Hi Clive,
Your sentence is more better, thank you very much for your help.
Your sentence is more better, thank you very much for your help.
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CliveHi,
A bit better, but I still have to guess at the meaning of parts of it. Maybe this.
Yes, the unit price is US$8/pc, for all our purchase orders to ABC company, which also include the PO below as Phoebe has mentioned. But only the last order (PO ***) of 5000pcs goods was inspected, and we changed the AQL to 1.5/2.5.
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was agrees with "order" -- the order of 500 pieces was inspected.
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Grammar Geekwas agrees with "order" -- the order of 500 pieces was inspected.Hi GG,
e.g. : 500pcs goods were inspected or 500pcs goods were shipped.
Is this correct to use "were" in these two sentences ?
Thanks
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