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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Business & Finance
Is this grammatical correct?
Dear (Boss last name),
Good day!
The KGA Water Refilling offered us a drinking water with the FREE use of water dispenser Hot and Cold. It is only Php 50.00 per gallon and 3-4 gallons per week that they can deliver to our office. They are also the water distributor in some offices here in Pink Walters Bldg.
With warm regards,
(sender)
What do you think? Is that correct? What sentence would you suggest?
I am highly appreciated for any response. Thanks.
Good day!
The KGA Water Refilling offered us a drinking water with the FREE use of water dispenser Hot and Cold. It is only Php 50.00 per gallon and 3-4 gallons per week that they can deliver to our office. They are also the water distributor in some offices here in Pink Walters Bldg.
With warm regards,
(sender)
What do you think? Is that correct? What sentence would you suggest?
I am highly appreciated for any response. Thanks.
Top answer
You are obviously not paying attention to the corrections I gave you in your previous letter. because you have repeated the same mistakes in your greeting and closing. If you cannot learn from the help you get here, then you will get no further help.
- You are obviously not paying attention to the corrections I gave you in your previous letter.
- because you have repeated the same mistakes in your greeting and closing.
- If you cannot learn from the help you get here, then you will get no further help.
- Dear Mr [family name] , KGA Water Refilling offered us drinking water with the free use of a hot and cold water dispenser.
- 00 per gallon, and they can deliver 3-4 gallons per week to our office.
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You are obviously not paying attention to the corrections I gave you in your previous letter. because you have repeated the same mistakes in your greeting and closing. If you cannot learn from the help you get here, then you will get no further help.
Dear Mr [family name],
KGA Water Refilling offered us drinking water with the free use of a hot and cold water dis
Dear Mr [family name],
KGA Water Refilling offered us drinking water with the free use of a hot and cold water dis
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