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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Is this grammatical?

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Is this sentence grammatical? Any mistakes?

The daughter at home often said that applicant’s both sons from his previous marriage and daughter of his current spouse treated her in a bad way; furthermore, in case of any conflict situations she felt no support from the father; therefore, she wished not to stay for a visit.

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The daughter at home often said that both of the applicant’s sons from his previous marriage and the daughter of his current spouse treated her ( state her name instead of saying "her" to be clear about who she is since more than one female is involved) in a bad way; furthermore, whenever there were conflicts, she felt no support from the father. Therefore, she wished not to stay for a visit.

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  • The daughter at home often said that both of the applicant’s sons from his previous marriage and the daughter of his current spouse treated her ( state her name instead of saying "her" to be clear about who she is since more than one female is involved) in a bad way; furthermore, whenever there were conflicts, she felt no support from the father.
  • Therefore, she wished not to stay for a visit.
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The daughter at home often said that both of the applicant’s sons from his previous marriage and the daughter of his current spouse treated her ( state her name instead of saying "her" to be clear about who she is since more than one female is involved) in a bad way; furthermore, whenever there were conflicts, she felt no support from the father. Therefore, she wished not to stay for a visit.
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