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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this grammatical?

Hi!

Is this sentence grammatical?

In accordance with the leasing agreement, on March 1, 2009 the vehicle was transferred into the use of Jim Smith.

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Anonymous was transferred into the use of After the date, a comma is needed. Instead of 'into', I would use 'for". ) “….

— Wilpeter

  • Anonymous was transferred into the use of After the date, a comma is needed.
  • Instead of 'into', I would use 'for".
  • ) “….
  • )
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Anonymouswas transferred into the use of
After the date, a comma is needed. Instead of 'into', I would use 'for".
“In accordance with the leasing agreement, on March 1, 2009, the vehicle was made available for the use of Jim Smith.” (The vehicle remains stationary, and Jim Smith can now use it.)
“…. was transferred to the temporary possession of Jim
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