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A Blinkin' Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

is this grammar structure ok?

That mankind has this kind of life, this is the life on earth in the future, the most wonderful life on earth, and a kind of life that man has yearned for.

Is this sentence right? If not, what's the grammar problem?
  

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Hi, That mankind has this kind of life, this is the life on earth in the future, the most wonderful life on earth, and a kind of life that man has yearned for. Is this sentence right? No.

  • Hi, That mankind has this kind of life, this is the life on earth in the future, the most wonderful life on earth, and a kind of life that man has yearned for.
  • Is this sentence right?
  • No.
  • If not, what's the grammar problem?
  • The major structural problem relates to the first part, That mankind has this kind of life.
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Hi,

That mankind has this kind of life, this is the life on earth in the future, the most wonderful life on earth, and a kind of life that man has yearned for.

Is this sentence right?
No.

If not, what's the grammar problem?

The major structural problem relates to the first part, Tha
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How to fix this?

can it be:

Mankind has this kind of life, and this is the life on earth in the future, and a kind of life that man has yearned for.

or Mankind has this kind of life; this is the life on earth in the future, and a kind of life that man has yearned for.
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Hi,

That mankind has this kind of life, this is the life on earth in the future, the most wonderful life on earth, and a kind of life that man has yearned for.
How to fix this?

can it be:

Mankind has this kind of life, and this is the life on earth in the future, and a kind of life that man has yearned for.

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