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Chrismlangan Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Is this grammar correct?

While traveling though a desolate area of space, Donald sees something in the distance that grabs his attention: The Fallen Creature and Proteron are flying blissfully across the horizon.
  

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Chrismlangan While traveling though a desolate area of space, Donald sees something in the distance that grabs his attention: The Fallen Creature and Proteron are flying blissfully across the horizon. No problem with grammar. After the colon, however, you do not need a capital letter.

— Philip

  • Chrismlangan While traveling though a desolate area of space, Donald sees something in the distance that grabs his attention: The Fallen Creature and Proteron are flying blissfully across the horizon.
  • No problem with grammar.
  • After the colon, however, you do not need a capital letter.
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ChrismlanganWhile traveling though a desolate area of space, Donald sees something in the distance that grabs his attention: The Fallen Creature and Proteron are flying blissfully across the horizon.
No problem with grammar. After the colon, however, you do not need a capital letter.
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After the colon, however, you do not need a capital letter.
I think this is a BrE - AmE thing, Philip-- I have been caught on it a couple of times, not seeing the point of a capital letter myself.
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