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00 "Accordingly, Japan as a host country worries about the ethnic differences, the adaptation of minority groups, and shows its concerns about the future of the immigrants, especially outcomes of the children. Here, to better understand the problems of Peruvian families, both communication problems and conflicts, a study within the household was done. The analysis of the family members’ communication shows that harmonized structure of families is based on respect of personal space, the degree of acculturation and reciprocal vulnerability within the household. To this extent, it is shown that Peruvian parents and their children have developed new paths of communication and mutual understanding that avoid family conflicts among them."02br
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0Basically fine; a few suggestions:02br 02br 00Accordingly, Japan as a host country worries 01b 00about ethnic differences and adaptation02b 00 of minority groups, and shows its concerns about the future 01b 00of immigrants02b 00, especially 01b 00the02b 00 outcomes 01b 00for 02b 00children. Here, to better understand the problems of Peruvian families, both communication problems and conflicts, a study within the household was done. The analysis 01b 00of 02b 00 01b 00family communication02b 00 shows that 01b 00the harmonious02b 00 structure of families is based on respect01b 00 for 02b 00personal space, the degree of acculturation01b 00,02b 00 and reciprocal vulnerability within the household.

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  • 0Basically fine; a few suggestions:02br 02br 00Accordingly, Japan as a host country worries 01b 00about ethnic differences and adaptation02b 00 of minority groups, and shows its concerns about the future 01b 00of immigrants02b 00, especially 01b 00the02b 00 outcomes 01b 00for 02b 00children.
  • Here, to better understand the problems of Peruvian families, both communication problems and conflicts, a study within the household was done.
  • The analysis 01b 00of 02b 00 01b 00family communication02b 00 shows that 01b 00the harmonious02b 00 structure of families is based on respect01b 00 for 02b 00personal space, the degree of acculturation01b 00,02b 00 and reciprocal vulnerability within the household.
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0Basically fine; a few suggestions:02br
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00Accordingly, Japan as a host country worries 01b00about ethnic differences and adaptation02b00 of minority groups, and shows its concerns about the future 01b00of immigrants02b00, especially 01b00the02b00 outcomes 01b00for 02b00children.
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