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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this gramatically correct?

Hi!

Any mistakes here?

It is well known that a guide is a person who introduces a visitor of Berlin with the city and captivates with an exciting story, as well as gives our city a special charm...

thanks a lot!!
  

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Here is my opinion. The phrase " it is well known " doesn't fly in this context. I read it 3 times and it just sounded awkward.

— Anonymous

  • Here is my opinion.
  • The phrase " it is well known " doesn't fly in this context.
  • I read it 3 times and it just sounded awkward.
  • It is a a long run-on sentence with no defined meaning, and it has syntactic errors.
  • For instance: I t is well known that a guide is a person who introduces a visitor of Berlin with the city and captivates with an exciting story, as well as gives our city a special charm.
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Here is my opinion.
The phrase " it is well known " doesn't fly in this context. I read it 3 times and it just sounded awkward.
It is a a long run-on sentence with no defined meaning, and it has syntactic errors. For instance:

It is well known that a guide is a pers
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Berlin's tour guides are well known for captivating its visitors with exciting stories about the city and introducing them to the city's charms.
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AlpheccaStarsBerlin's tour guides are well known for captivating its visitors with exciting stories about the city and introducing them to the city's charms.
With the same words, that seem to work much better than the original. How about: Berlin's tour guides are well known for their captivating and exciting stories, as well as narrartions revealing the charms
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