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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this gramatically correct?

Hello!
Is this gramatically correct?

Over the course of the marriage on November 20, 2000 a daughter, Jane, was born, but on February 15, 2001 – a son, John.

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Anonymous Over the course of the marriage on November 20, 2000 That is a meaningless phrase unless you are going to describe the wedding in detail. Over the course of the marriage, a daughter Jane was born on November 20th, 2000 and a son John was born on February 15, 2001.

  • Anonymous Over the course of the marriage on November 20, 2000 That is a meaningless phrase unless you are going to describe the wedding in detail.
  • Over the course of the marriage, a daughter Jane was born on November 20th, 2000 and a son John was born on February 15, 2001.
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AnonymousOver the course of the marriage on November 20, 2000
That is a meaningless phrase unless you are going to describe the wedding in detail.

Over the course of the marriage, a daughter Jane was born on November 20th, 2000 and a son John was born on February 15, 2001.
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The timing is impossible unless it was a lesbian marriage with the two women having overlapping pregnancies.
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BarbaraPAThe timing is impossible
And that is why we have female moderators! (In addition to their keen minds for English grammar, of course.)
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BarbaraPAThe timing is impossible
Yes, the first thing I did was count months, but then I thought maybe it was twins.
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Hi, I would like to know what is the meaning of phrase "over the course of". Please give me your suggestions.

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