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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Is this good grammar? Looks wrong to me
Dear Enquirer,
Your enquiry is our top priority!
Our Account Manager, Sandy M********* will call, or email you within the next 3-5 hours, to discuss your requirements further.
In the meantime, if your enquiry is urgent, or you do not hear from us, please call Sandy direct on 07429 *****, or call our Reception Desk on 0141 ********..
Thank you for your interest in our services.
Your enquiry is our top priority!
Our Account Manager, Sandy M********* will call, or email you within the next 3-5 hours, to discuss your requirements further.
In the meantime, if your enquiry is urgent, or you do not hear from us, please call Sandy direct on 07429 *****, or call our Reception Desk on 0141 ********..
Thank you for your interest in our services.
Top answer
Which part(s) do you think are wrong? The sentence beginning "Our Account Manager" is incorrectly punctuated. All the commas can be removed.
- Which part(s) do you think are wrong?
- The sentence beginning "Our Account Manager" is incorrectly punctuated.
- All the commas can be removed.
- I see no reason why "reception desk" should be capitalised.
- The penultimate sentence has two full stops at the end.
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Which part(s) do you think are wrong?
The sentence beginning "Our Account Manager" is incorrectly punctuated. All the commas can be removed.
I see no reason why "reception desk" should be capitalised.
The penultimate sentence has two full stops at the end.
The sentence beginning "Our Account Manager" is incorrectly punctuated. All the commas can be removed.
I see no reason why "reception desk" should be capitalised.
The penultimate sentence has two full stops at the end.
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