is this good enough?

My Crimson's Death

Know not my weaken heart to cry,
Persisted our liason I try,
Simply mine burden soul thou buried deep,
Yet mine content psyche thou turned to weep,

I long to hear thy voice,
Those tone thou composed the noise,
Mine lips hunger for thine kiss,
Lovin' I to thee who used to tease,

Avowed the world to thee I belong,
Forsaken silhouette!!! "Marry me"
Shook me awaken from a dream,
Spoke to me it was not him,

Muted mouth voided eye,
Grabbed a life cant I believe thou die,
Not a merry life with thee I savor yet,
What a hard heart not left to be kept,

Oh... my love, my love I sob,
Evicted hope mine soul thou now throb,
Insisted misery none can heal,
Mystery of ours now let seal