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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is this good English?
Please can you tell me if this is good English? Thank you very much.
«One of the roles universally attributed to teaching how to draw is the development of observation skills.»
«One of the roles universally attributed to teaching how to draw is the development of observation skills.»
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No, it's not. Teaching does not have roles. Teachers have roles.
- No, it's not.
- Teaching does not have roles.
- Teachers have roles.
- Development is not a role.
- i suggest you reword.
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No, it's not.
Teaching does not have roles. Teachers have roles.
Development is not a role.
i suggest you reword.
eg
A good drawing teacher always encourages
Teaching does not have roles. Teachers have roles.
Development is not a role.
i suggest you reword.
eg
A good drawing teacher always encourages
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Thank you Clive. Please tell me, how about this:
One of the consequences of learning how to draw is the development of a power of observation.
One of the consequences of learning how to draw is the development of a power of observation.
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It's the power that is the consequence, not the development.
eg One of the consequences of learning how to draw is a well-developed power of observation.
eg One of the consequences of learning how to draw is a well-developed power of observation.
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