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Trevor turns on the lightsaber and starts swinging with it carefully, quickly getting bolder and more excited.
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, his hips) with the lightsaber, rather, he is swinging the lightsaber: Trevor turns on the lightsaber and starts swinging it carefully, quickly growing bolder and more excited.
- , his hips) with the lightsaber, rather, he is swinging the lightsaber: Trevor turns on the lightsaber and starts swinging it carefully, quickly growing bolder and more excited.
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Trevor is presumably not "swinging with the lightsaber", which implies that he's swinging something other than the lightsaber (e.g., his hips) with the lightsaber, rather, he is swinging the lightsaber:
Trevor turns on the lightsaber and starts swinging it carefully, quickly growing bolder and more excited.
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