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If the player after the game or during it has any complaints about the game, he or she has right to submit such complaints, within 30 days from occurrence of complaints, to the gambling organizer via e-mail XXXXX or by calling the client service line XXXXXXX.

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If the player has any complaint about the game, he or she has the right to submit such complaint within 30 days from its occurrence to the gambling organizer via e-mail to X or by calling the client service line at X.

  • If the player has any complaint about the game, he or she has the right to submit such complaint within 30 days from its occurrence to the gambling organizer via e-mail to X or by calling the client service line at X.
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If the player has any complaint about the game, he or she has the right to submit such complaint within 30 days from its occurrence to the gambling organizer via e-mail to X or by calling the client service line at X.

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