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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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During 2014, public participation in the activities of the Corruption Prevention Bureau has not decreased, and it is clearly evidenced by the applications received from private individuals – during the first half of the year 587 applications were received (in 2012, 982 applications were received in total, but in 2013 – 1033 applications).

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