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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Is this fine?
Hi teachers, is this fine or would you improve it?
When I came up to the food table I saw that my box of chocolates hadn't been touched, so I picked it up and placed it on an elevated tray which was almost empty.
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] [higher tray? ] which was almost empty. I've suggested three changes above, giving When I came up to the buffet table, I saw that my box of chocolates hadn't been touched, so I moved it to a higher tray which was almost empty .
- ] [higher tray?
- ] which was almost empty.
- I've suggested three changes above, giving When I came up to the buffet table, I saw that my box of chocolates hadn't been touched, so I moved it to a higher tray which was almost empty .
- anonymous Is this fine?
- In my variety of English 'fine' is only used in affirmative statements.
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anonymousWhen I came up to the [food table?] [buffet table?] I saw that my box of chocolates hadn't been touched, so I [picked it up and placed it on?] [moved it to?] an [elevated tray?] [higher tray? / raised tray?] which was almost empty.
I've suggested three changes above, giving
When I came up to the buffet table, I saw that my box of chocolate
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