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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is this fine?
Hi, all. Is this fine or would you rephrase it?
The drunk man stopped to take a gulp from the whiskey bottle, but it was empty. He peered into the bottle, wondering where all the whiskey had gone, then threw it on the ground.
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anonymous The drunk man stopped to take a gulp from the whiskey bottle, but it was empty. He peered into the bottle, wondering where all the whiskey had gone, then threw it on the ground. It is fine.
- anonymous The drunk man stopped to take a gulp from the whiskey bottle, but it was empty.
- He peered into the bottle, wondering where all the whiskey had gone, then threw it on the ground.
- It is fine.
- If I was to change anything, I would make "had gone" "went".
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anonymousThe drunk man stopped to take a gulp from the whiskey bottle, but it was empty. He peered into the bottle, wondering where all the whiskey had gone, then threw it on the ground.
It is fine. If I was to change anything, I would make "had gone" "went".
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