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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Is this fine?

Hello teachers. Is this fine? Would you change anything?

The cop raises his gun, but before he can pull the trigger, the bank robber fires and kills him with two shots.

Thanks in advance.

  

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I'd drop the comma after trigger .

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  • I'd drop the comma after trigger .
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I'd drop the comma after trigger.

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