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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Is this fine?

I'm about to send below email to hotel in US. Is this fine? Please improve.

Hello,

Can you fax me room rates at my number XXX-XXXX?
Your prompt response is very much appreciated.

Thanks,
Michael
  

Top answer

That looks fine. I might add: Are your room rates posted online? If not, please be so kind as to include your rates in an email reply or FAX them to XXXXXX.

— Ed_shaw

  • That looks fine.
  • I might add: Are your room rates posted online?
  • If not, please be so kind as to include your rates in an email reply or FAX them to XXXXXX.
  • )
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That looks fine.

I might add:

Are your room rates posted online? If not, please be
so kind as to include your rates in an email reply or FAX them
to XXXXXX.

(Just a thought.)
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Thanks, Ed, for sharing your thoughts on this. I will add them. Emotion: smile
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