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EvanWu Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is this expression right? Then how to shorten it, 3ks

Award: Most Popular Prize in Shanghai division contest of Trust Danone Business Game

Due to the word limit in the online application form, i need a short and simple title. Can anyone help me out? many many thanks.

Evan Wu

Shanghai, China
  

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Hello, Evan - and welcome to English Forums. You have failed to give us the word limit, which seems to be critical. Why would you omit that?!

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, Evan - and welcome to English Forums.
  • You have failed to give us the word limit, which seems to be critical.
  • Why would you omit that?!
  • All I can do is suggest the following.
  • All or any of the phrases in parentheses may be omitted: (Trust Danone Business Game / TDBG ) Popularity Prize (Shanghai (Division) )
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Hello, Evan - and welcome to English Forums.

You have failed to give us the word limit, which seems to be critical. Why would you omit that?! All I can do is suggest the following. All or any of the phrases in parentheses may be omitted:

(Trust Danone Business Game / TDBG ) Popularity Prize (Shanghai (Division) )
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Sorry. I input the complete title and the part in the parentheses is omitted by the system.

Most Popular Prize in Shanghai division contest of Trust Dan (one Business Game)

Or maybe i have to omit part and give some description in the description field which is below the title.
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Well, until you tell us the word limit, I cannot help more.
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the word limit is 60 characters (including space)
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Here are two in 35 characters:

Shanghai Trust Dan Popularity Prize

Trust Dan Shanghai Popularity Prize
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thanks for your efforts, Mister

I really appreciate it.
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