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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Is this email written correctly (Thank you in advance)

I would like to apply for the PhD position at Roche Diagnostics GMBH (ROCHE). Your name was mentioned in the PhD advertisement.

I would like to humbly ask you if this position is already filled? The reason I ask is because I could not find any deadline for this position. So, If the position is still available I am extremely interested and I would definitely like to apply for this position.
  

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I personally would write it as follows, and I believe you should just go ahead and apply, as these types of positions might take a while to fill, and they would want to collect as many potential applicants as possible: Dear ______ , I just saw your advertisement in the ______ issue of _________, for the ________ PhD position at Roche Diagnostics GMBH (ROCHE). I have a PhD in _______ from ________ University, and I have experience in _________ , which I believe would qualify me for the position. I am very interested in applying for the position, and have attached my resume.

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  • I personally would write it as follows, and I believe you should just go ahead and apply, as these types of positions might take a while to fill, and they would want to collect as many potential applicants as possible: Dear ______ , I just saw your advertisement in the ______ issue of _________, for the ________ PhD position at Roche Diagnostics GMBH (ROCHE).
  • I have a PhD in _______ from ________ University, and I have experience in _________ , which I believe would qualify me for the position.
  • I am very interested in applying for the position, and have attached my resume.
  • My email address is _____, and my phone number is _______ , in case you want to reach me.
  • Sincerely, ________
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I personally would write it as follows, and I believe you should just go ahead and apply, as these types of positions might take a while to fill, and they would want to collect as many potential applicants as possible:

Dear ______,

I just saw your advertisement in the ______ issue of _________, for the ________ PhD position at Roche Diagnostics GMBH (ROCHE). I have a P
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What you are writing is called a cover letter. In it, you need to highlight the main skills that make you suitable for this job, In other words, sell yourself. Tell the employer why he should give you the job and not someone else. Make him want to read your resume. If he receives 100 letters with resumes attached, he's not going to read every resume. He''ll s
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