It reads OK, but here are some suggestions: I would like to ask you if we have a right to terminate our contract if we give 3 months advance notice. On page 2 of the contract in the section " commencement and termination of the tenancy, " it was not clearly explained. It just mention s that the tenancy commences on 28/7/13 for a period of o ne year.
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kouroshhIs it correct to use You after ask?Yes. It is not necessary though.