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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is this email written correctly? Should I change some parts?

Thank you for taking the time to write me about how I could apply for your position. Fortunately, I applied for the position before the deadline. I am really interested about your project. After I read the description of your project I told myself that it is exactly what I was dreaming to do in my future work . So, I very much look forward to the interview if I am among the short-listed candidates.
  

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I am really interested in about your project. I am really enthused interested about your project. I am really keen to learn more interested about your project.

— AlpheccaStars

  • I am really interested in about your project.
  • I am really enthused interested about your project.
  • I am really keen to learn more interested about your project.
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I am really interested in about your project.
I am really enthused interested about your project.
I am really keen to learn more interested about your project.
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Dear AlpheccaStars,

What do you think about this version:

Thank you for taking your time to write me about how I could apply for your position. Fortunately, I applied for the position before the deadline. I am really interested in your project. After I read the description of your project I told myself that this position is exactly what I intend to enter for my future career. S
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It's a little bit choppy in style, but ok as a formal reply.
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