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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is this email written correctly

Hi,

Thank you for your message. You made me very glad. I hope everything has being going on well with you. Unfortunately, my right foot was fractured 10 days ago and I was not able to enjoy Halloween party so much except we watched a film called The Shining (1980).

Please say my hello to every member of our family there.
I will be in touch with you.
Kourosh
  

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Hi,
I would write it as;
Hi,
Thank you for your kind message. I am glad to hear from you. I hope everything has been going well for you.
I fractured my right foot 10 days ago so I couldn't enjoy the Halloween party as much as I would have liked. However, we watched a movie called , The Shining, it was pretty good.
Send my regards to your family,
Kind Regards
Kou

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