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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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is this email written correctly

I really appreciate that you were spending time and responding to my previous email. Yes, I was asking about the possibility of doing graduate studies (PhD). Unfortunately, I have no one who can support my scholarship from my country. I will try to see if I can find any sponsorship directly from there.

If not, then I will e-mail you next year again. I hope that time I can be able to get a support from you. I am extremely interested for doing PhD research under your supervision because your research area is exactly the one I am dreaming to do in my future career.
  

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I would write it like this, athough I think your point got across very clearly as it is: I really appreciate you taking your time to respond to my previous e-mail. Yes, I was asking about the possibility of doing graduate studies (PhD). However, I could not find any scholarship support from my country.

  • I would write it like this, athough I think your point got across very clearly as it is: I really appreciate you taking your time to respond to my previous e-mail.
  • Yes, I was asking about the possibility of doing graduate studies (PhD).
  • However, I could not find any scholarship support from my country.
  • ).
  • If I cannot find anything, then I will e-mail you again next year.
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I would write it like this, athough I think your point got across very clearly as it is:

I really appreciate you taking your time to respond to my previous e-mail. Yes, I was asking about the possibility of doing graduate studies (PhD). However, I could not find any scholarship support from my country. I will try to see if I can find any sponsorship from there (directly from your country
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I really like the way you had edited my text. Your edition is really great. I greatly appreciate your help.

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