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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Thank you for your response. I am really glad to see that you are going to gather all family in one place and congratulate on your birthday in advance. Unfortunately, I am going on 7th of May to Budapest for 2 weeks and then I will be very busy for the whole summer and autumn. I am afraid that I can not make it. Moreover, Visa process is really hard procedure and takes some months. However, I plan to visit U.S next year if I can get a visa. I really want to see you and the rest of the family
  

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My version: Thank you for your response. And "Happy Birthday" in advance. I am really glad to see that you are going to gather all the family in one place.

  • My version: Thank you for your response.
  • And "Happy Birthday" in advance.
  • I am really glad to see that you are going to gather all the family in one place.
  • Unfortunately, on May 7th I am going to Budapest for two weeks , and then I'll be very busy for the whole summer and autumn so I 'm afraid that I can't make it.
  • Besides, the process of getting a visa is really hard and takes some months.
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My version:

Thank you for your response. And "Happy Birthday" in advance. I am really glad to see that you are going to gather all the family in one place. Unfortunately, on May 7th I am going to Budapest for two weeks, and then I'll be very busy for the whole summer and autumn so I'm afraid that I can't make it. Besides, the process of getting a vi

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