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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Is this email written correctly?
Dear Alex,
I am friend of Sara. She has told me that you are looking for a person to work in your hotel for a breakfast service. I would like to inform you that I am highly interested to do this part-time job and I am fully available to start at anytime you would prefer. In addition, I got a work permit to work in Poland
I would really appreciate it if you can take look at my CV which I have attached in this email for you. I can also come to your hotel to meet you in person anytime which is convenient with you.
I am friend of Sara. She has told me that you are looking for a person to work in your hotel for a breakfast service. I would like to inform you that I am highly interested to do this part-time job and I am fully available to start at anytime you would prefer. In addition, I got a work permit to work in Poland
I would really appreciate it if you can take look at my CV which I have attached in this email for you. I can also come to your hotel to meet you in person anytime which is convenient with you.
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Dear Alex, I am friend of Sara' s . She told me that you are looking for a person to work in your hotel for a breakfast service. ) Additionally , I have a work permit to work in Poland I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at my CV, ( comma after 'CV' ) which I have attached in this email for you.
- Dear Alex, I am friend of Sara' s .
- She told me that you are looking for a person to work in your hotel for a breakfast service.
- ) Additionally , I have a work permit to work in Poland I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at my CV, ( comma after 'CV' ) which I have attached in this email for you.
- I can also come to your hotel to meet you in person anytime that is convenient with you.
- ***I would probably use 'résumé' in lieu of 'CV'.
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Dear Alex,
I am friend of Sara's. She told me that you are looking for a person to work in your hotel for a breakfast service. I would like to inform you that I am highly interested to do this part-time job,(comma after 'job') and I am fully (omit 'fully') available to start at any time (omit 'you would prefer'.) Additionally,
I am friend of Sara's. She told me that you are looking for a person to work in your hotel for a breakfast service. I would like to inform you that I am highly interested to do this part-time job,(comma after 'job') and I am fully (omit 'fully') available to start at any time (omit 'you would prefer'.) Additionally,
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