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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Is this email written correctly?

I hope you had a great weekend. I would like to inform you that I moved to Warsaw from 2nd of February till 26 of February. If anytime you or the representative of the companies would like to contact me this is my new mobile number: (+48) 1111111.

If you need me for a personal interview in Krakow with yourself and representative of the companies I could come anytime you wish. For a visa issue if I could become qualify for your position I could make an online application without any problem for long-term visa.
  

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Greetings, were I the addressee, I would still understand what it is you are talking about. that I am staying in Warsaw from the February 2nd to to February 26th. The representative of the companies ?

  • Greetings, were I the addressee, I would still understand what it is you are talking about.
  • that I am staying in Warsaw from the February 2nd to to February 26th.
  • The representative of the companies ?
  • Does he indeed represent several ones, or is he a humble company representative ?
  • If you and the company representatives need me for a personalal interview, I could come whenever you wish.
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Greetings,

were I the addressee, I would still understand what it is you are talking about. Were I your editor, however, I would use my humble powers to make a few remarks:

...that I am staying in Warsaw from the February 2nd to to February 26th.

The representative of the companies? Does he indeed represent several ones, or is he a humble company repr
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Hi,

I hope you had a great weekend' is something you'd say in a casual email to a friend. Not in an email like this.

I applied for the position of Systems Analyst on 3/Jan/2013, and I am still awaiting a reply. I would like to inform you that I will be in Warsaw from 2nd to 26t
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Dear Gleb and Clive,

I greatly appreciate your help.

regards,
Kourosh

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