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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this email written correctly?

Is this email written correctly?

Hi Peter,

I have attached the file which I have told you about in my previous message. As, I told you I appreciate if you could take a look at this word file whenever you are free and give me your feedback.

I am not in a rush and please take your time.

I would greatly appreciate your help.
  

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Hi, Hi Peter, I have attached the file which I told you about in my previous email. As I said, I'd appreciate it if you could take a look whenever you are free, and give me your feedback. I am not in a rush so please take your time.

— Clive

  • Hi, Hi Peter, I have attached the file which I told you about in my previous email.
  • As I said, I'd appreciate it if you could take a look whenever you are free, and give me your feedback.
  • I am not in a rush so please take your time.
  • I greatly appreciate your help.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Hi Peter,

I have attached the file which I told you about in my previous email. As I said, I'd appreciate it if you could take a look whenever you are free, and give me your feedback.

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PS I just fixed a typo, in red.
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I like Clive's reply, but I would put a comma here ("rush, so") because it is a coordinating conjunction.
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I really appreciate your help Clive's!
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