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Rsharma Posted 16 years ago
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I need your help to prepare a brief proSoft & SAP overview which we can quickly explain to our prospects over the phone. I have made a small overview about SAP in very simple language, please provide your insight on this?

SAP stands for System Application and products in data processing. SAP creates a common centralized database for the applications running in an organization. The application has been assembled in such a versatile way that it handles the entire functional department within an organization. Today major companies including Microsoft & IBM are using SAPs product to run their own business.

Similarly, if you could help us with a small PBS overview then things would get easier for us.
  

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I made a few little corrections as you will see below. I hope this is helpful to you. I need your help to prepare a brief proSoft & SAP overview which we can quickly explain to our prospects over the phone.

  • I made a few little corrections as you will see below.
  • I hope this is helpful to you.
  • I need your help to prepare a brief proSoft & SAP overview which we can quickly explain to our prospects over the phone.
  • I have made a small overview about SAP in very simple languag e .
  • P lease provide your insight on this .
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I made a few little corrections as you will see below. I hope this is helpful to you.

I need your help to prepare a brief proSoft & SAP overview which we can quickly explain to our prospects over the phone. I have made a small overview about SAP in very simple language

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