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Ali Raza 8666 Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing

Is this Effective Business Intro?

Hi,i am new here and i found that you guys are great.Actually i've a problem,one of my friend has started a business of Sports wear and he want me to write a best and effective Business introduction mail for his buyers And i wrote this one but i am not fully satisfy with that so if you guys plz help me to make this better and effective.i'll be graetfull to you. Thanks
Letter Is below
Dear,
Sir/Madam,
I hope you be doing fine there.Greetings from Addax Sports.We’re manufacturer & exporter of Sports goods , Boxing Gloves,Leather Jackets.
I found that you are dealing in the products we’re specialized in manufacturing for.These products are already being manufactured in our factory and being exported around the globe. Kindly find enclosed some pictures of our manufactured products for your consideration.
We assure you that we can provide you best quality products with very competitive prices. You can always visit our website to see our whole product range.
Free samples can be provided at demand on freight collect basi.

Looking forward to your early/positive response.You can Also Email me On my Personal E-mail Address"Email Removed".

With Best Regards,

xyz
Sales Manager
xxxxxx Sports
  

Top answer

Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from ABC Sports! We are a manufacturer and exporter of sporting goods, from boxing gloves to leather jackets. We understand that you are dealing in the products we manufacture and export around the globe and we would like to interest you in examining some of our work.

  • Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from ABC Sports!
  • We are a manufacturer and exporter of sporting goods, from boxing gloves to leather jackets.
  • We understand that you are dealing in the products we manufacture and export around the globe and we would like to interest you in examining some of our work.
  • Please find enclosed some pictures of our products for your consideration.
  • Also, p lease visit our website at [ URL ] to see our whole product range.
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Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from ABC Sports!

We are a manufacturer and exporter of sporting goods, from boxing gloves to leather jackets. We understand that you are dealing in the products we manufacture and export around the globe and we would like to interest you in examining some of our work. Please find enclosed some pictures of our products for your considera
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I''ll never forget your timely help.Thank You Very Much Mr.Micawber

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