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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this easy to understand?

The patient was admitted with complaints of pain in the lower abdomen since May of 2014 which periodically becomes stronger.

Is it clear that the patient felt pain since may and the pain periodically became stronger?

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It seems to me that this is simpler: The patient was admitted with complaints of fluctuating pain in the lower abdomen since May 2014.

— Mister Micawber

  • It seems to me that this is simpler: The patient was admitted with complaints of fluctuating pain in the lower abdomen since May 2014.
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It seems to me that this is simpler:

The patient was admitted with complaints of fluctuating pain in the lower abdomen since May 2014.
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