Is this e-mail wrong?
Hello to everybody!
English is not my first language. Therefore I need your opinion about an e-mail I wrote.
I have been told everything in it is wrong in every aspect.
Please have in mind I was not trying to sound American, Australian, Canadian, etcetera.
I imagine there are plenty of better ways to rephrase my e-mail, but I need to know if I used the correct grammar and sentence structure.
Thank you very much!
Just below, I will paste the unedited e-mail.
Good Evening,
In Company Name, we take very seriously the time of our clients, that is why I want to inform you we have come to a solution to be able to see you in the morning as it is best for you.
The time for the appointment will remain as originally discussed, 11:00 am to 12:00 pm.
Thank you!
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Here is your text, with as few changes as possible. Good Evening, At Company Name, we take very seriously the time of our clients . That is why I want to inform you we have come to a decision that we will be able to see you in the morning as it is best for you.
- Here is your text, with as few changes as possible.
- Good Evening, At Company Name, we take very seriously the time of our clients .
- That is why I want to inform you we have come to a decision that we will be able to see you in the morning as it is best for you.
- The time for the appointment will remain as originally discussed, 11:00 am to 12:00 pm.
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Here is your text, with as few changes as possible.
Good Evening,
At Company Name, we take very seriously the time of our clients. That is why I want to inform you we have come to a decision that we will be able to see you in the morning as it is best for you.
The time for the appointment will remain as originally discussed, 11:00 am to 12:00 pm.
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