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Witty apple 602 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is this double with proper or not?

By today I have created a database of around 21 companies operating both on their local but also global market, with a few selected “best opportunity” companies I maintain a direct relationship with.

  

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by today + Present Perfect dos not work. You need to reword a bit. Also, your sentence is too long and has some other problems.

  • by today + Present Perfect dos not work.
  • You need to reword a bit.
  • Also, your sentence is too long and has some other problems.
  • Again, reword.
  • Say eg Today I have finished creating a database of around 21 companies operating both on their local and on the global market.
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by today + Present Perfect dos not work. You need to reword a bit.


Also, your sentence is too long and has some other problems. Again, reword.

Say eg Today I have finished creating a database of around 21 companies operating both on their local and on the global market. I have included a few selected “best opportunity” companies I maintain a direct relationship with.

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witty apple 602Is this double "with" proper or not?

It's proper.

with companies with which I maintain a relationship
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with companies which I maintain a relationship with
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with companies I maintain a relationship with

The "with"s are not

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