Is this descriptive natural? XXII.V.MMXIX
One day in a deafening–silence classroom. Students were listening to the teacher. The murmur of boredom lulling them to sleep. It had been like an eternity and the teacher was still speaking, doesn't seem to stop. The students left the class because the bell had rung. But the teacher was still having a floor there until the concrete tumbling down like raindrops. The tables wobbing, losing its control. The building had collapsed; She's dead.
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You mean "silent," but it can't be silent if the students are listening to the teacher. She's teaching, probably speaking. The murmur of boredom lulling them to sleep.
- You mean "silent," but it can't be silent if the students are listening to the teacher.
- She's teaching, probably speaking.
- The murmur of boredom lulling them to sleep.
- This is a fragment.
- Additionally, you mention sound again after saying there was no noise.
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You mean "silent," but it can't be silent if the students are listening to the teacher. She's teaching, probably speaking.
The murmur of boredom lulling them to sleep. This is a fragment. Additionally, you mention sound again after saying there was no noise. Use commas in compound sentences.
But the teacher still had the floor until the concrete tumbled down like raindrops. My qu
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