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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Is this descriptive natural? XVIII.V.MMXIX

I looked out of the window, I saw a guy strolling at the paradise-green playground. Next to the playground was a sapphire-blue pond located next to the building. Its peacefulness gave me a feel of solitude. The blue sky seemed to be engraved onto the pane. Fish were plopping in the glassy lake. A regiment of flies droned over the deep stomach of the pond. Now comes a battalion of butterflies. The wonder and necromancy of the pond brought an 'hosanna moment'. The wind exhaled over the gnarly bushes of the playground. The nipping midges were painful, causing us to jump. The scent of wild roses smelled utopia sweet.

  

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I looked out of the windo w, (comma splice) I saw a guy strolling on at the paradise-green playground. Next to the playground was a sapphire-blue pond located next to the building. Its peacefulness gave me a feel of solitude.

  • I looked out of the windo w, (comma splice) I saw a guy strolling on at the paradise-green playground.
  • Next to the playground was a sapphire-blue pond located next to the building.
  • Its peacefulness gave me a feel of solitude.
  • The blue sky seemed to be engraved onto the pane .
  • ) Fish were plopping in the glassy lake.
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I looked out of the window, (comma splice) I saw a guy strolling on at the paradise-green playground. Next to the playground was a sapphire-blue pond located next to the building. Its peacefulness gave me a feel of solitude. The blue sky see

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