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I'm describing the scene and atmosphere when I was visiting a theme park.
It was dark, like the sky engulfing The North Sea. A cling of clouds were hovering, lingered in the darkness.
The gust of winds raged as it was windy; The fearsome breezing noise would bolt onto my heartbeat and send a thrill across my body.
It was freezing as if a giant North-pole-monster coming at me, but instead. It was a breeze, smashing through my skin, latching its frostiest air onto my lungs, giving the most uncontrollable tremble of all kinds.
A raucous, violent screeching echoed as if a metal collided with a gigantic alloy, followed by an eerie scream of joy. People were enjoying a tremendous roller coaster there.
A restlessness bang gave me a tempestuous feel as the fireworks spurted out the most thrilling noise ever.
It was the most fascinating theme park I had ever visited despite those scary, thrilling noises.
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