Is this descriptive natural? 8589

The mountain was high. So high. The steepness would latch onto my heartbeat and send a thrill across my body. A gust of wind blew through the mountain with a powerful passion, scattering leaves as if they were the dust devil.
At the view from the wooden platform, the strenuous blue lake shimmering through the sky as if a blazing light pierced through a chunk of woods. Drips drops of water gives a harmonious feel like living in paradise. A bird chirping to the rhythm of droplets. It was really calm that it makes me feel like leaning on a posh garden chair made with top-notch cotton. The sun was hiding as if kids were playing hide-and-seek; The lack of sun gives me a feel of solitary, loneliness, desiderium.