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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Is this descriptive natural?
A plume of gigantic mist breezed in. The gust of wind hitting the roof violently. A ginormous gunk of storm swung into the expanse.
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You get an "E" for effort. You employed good techniques, but some failed in detail. The mist was not gigantic, the plume was.
- You get an "E" for effort.
- You employed good techniques, but some failed in detail.
- The mist was not gigantic, the plume was.
- This almost works as hypallage, almost, but it trips over itself because the reader stops to consider what the heck gigantic mist might be.
- The second group of words is not a sentence, even allowing a broad definition of the term.
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You get an "E" for effort. You employed good techniques, but some failed in detail.
The mist was not gigantic, the plume was. This almost works as hypallage, almost, but it trips over itself because the reader stops to consider what the heck gigantic mist might be.
The second group of words is not a sentence, even allowing a broad definition of the term.
"Ginormous", however
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