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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Is this correct/natural?
“There are several factors at play here. One of the most important of these factors is temperature.”
how do I make rephrase this to make it sound better?
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I'd leave out the second occurrence of "factors". Other than that, I don't see how you'd make it better. It's pretty concise as it is.
- I'd leave out the second occurrence of "factors".
- Other than that, I don't see how you'd make it better.
- It's pretty concise as it is.
- CJ
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I'd leave out the second occurrence of "factors". Other than that, I don't see how you'd make it better. It's pretty concise as it is.
CJ
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