Is this correctly written?
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Is this correctly written?
The Agency is a non-profit organization aimed towards training public administration officials and judiciary representatives, offering training programmes in almost all fields of the law, attention being paid to the topicality of the specific field on the European Union agenda.
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You are trying to say too much in one sentence. I suggest this. The Agency is a non-profit organization aimed towards training public administration officials and judiciary representatives .
- You are trying to say too much in one sentence.
- I suggest this.
- The Agency is a non-profit organization aimed towards training public administration officials and judiciary representatives .
- It offers training programmes in almost all fields of the law, and pays particular attention to the topicality of the specific field on the European Union agenda.
- I don't clearly understand the italicized phrase at the end.
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You are trying to say too much in one sentence.
I suggest this.
The Agency is a non-profit organization aimed towards training public administration officials and judiciary representatives. It offers training programmes in almost all fields of the law, and pays particular attention to the topicality of the specific field on the European Union agenda.
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