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Chatti Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Is this correctly written?

hello guys
I need to know if is this properly written cause when I translated it to my mother language it doesn't make sense.

{My goal is to collaborate with the team and it allows me to utilize my skills to offer impeccable service with an opportunity for growth and career advancement as successful achievement and further enhance the company's success and reputation.}

thank you for your time
  

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It is too chock-full of hyperbole to be believable, but at least I can fix your construction: My goal is to collaborate with a team, allowing me to utilize my skills to offer impeccable service and gain an opportunity for growth and career advancement with successful achievement and further enhance the company's success and reputation.

  • It is too chock-full of hyperbole to be believable, but at least I can fix your construction: My goal is to collaborate with a team, allowing me to utilize my skills to offer impeccable service and gain an opportunity for growth and career advancement with successful achievement and further enhance the company's success and reputation.
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It is too chock-full of hyperbole to be believable, but at least I can fix your construction:

My goal is to collaborate with a team, allowing me to utilize my skills to offer impeccable service and gain an opportunity for growth and career advancement with successful achievement and further enhance the company's success and reputation.

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