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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this correctly written?

How would you write the following?

When I first had the 2 hamburgers, I like that one more but over the next couple of months, slowly but surely, I started liking the other one more.

How would you say? Would you change a few words?
If you would like to know which hamburger is better, you can't taste each one at separate times, you need to have all the burgers side by side and take a bite of each one after the other.

Thanks in advance
  

Top answer

" The next one is good except for punctuation: "If you would like to know which hamburger is better, you can't taste them at separate times. "

— Anonymous

  • " The next one is good except for punctuation: "If you would like to know which hamburger is better, you can't taste them at separate times.
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This is my best attempt (though it is a little awkward):

"When I first had those two kinds of hamburgers, I preferred one, but over the next couple of months, slowly but surely, I started to like the other one more."

The next one is good except for punctuation:

"If you would like to know which hamburger is better, you can't taste them at separate times. You need to have
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