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is this correctly written?
i am writing titles for an article:
ADSL tendencies
ADSL development success case, by ........
or
Success development case of ADSL, by ......
another question souldn`t the first one be ADSL`s
and this following paragragh:
Currently, there are four main types of existing accesses throughout the market: ADSL, Cable modem, wireless and satellites that are analyzed. Furthermore, carry out the access description as well as interviews with the most successful operator in the implementation of each one of these technologies. Additionally, present the opinions of the leading providers in each area concerning the services evolution.
daniel
i would really appreciate your comments
thank you.
ADSL tendencies
ADSL development success case, by ........
or
Success development case of ADSL, by ......
another question souldn`t the first one be ADSL`s
and this following paragragh:
Currently, there are four main types of existing accesses throughout the market: ADSL, Cable modem, wireless and satellites that are analyzed. Furthermore, carry out the access description as well as interviews with the most successful operator in the implementation of each one of these technologies. Additionally, present the opinions of the leading providers in each area concerning the services evolution.
daniel
i would really appreciate your comments
thank you.
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]. Present the access description and interviews with the most successful operator in the implementation of each one of these technologies. Additionally, present the opinions of their leading providers concerning the evolution of their services.
- ].
- Present the access description and interviews with the most successful operator in the implementation of each one of these technologies.
- Additionally, present the opinions of their leading providers concerning the evolution of their services.
- This paragraph sounds like a student assignment, not the introduction to an article.
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ADSL: A Case of Successful Development
Currently, there are four main types of internet access on the market: ADSL, cable modem, wireless and satellites to be analyzed [?]. Present the access description and interviews with the most successful operator in the implementation of each one of these technologies. Additionally, present the opinions of their leading providers concern
Currently, there are four main types of internet access on the market: ADSL, cable modem, wireless and satellites to be analyzed [?]. Present the access description and interviews with the most successful operator in the implementation of each one of these technologies. Additionally, present the opinions of their leading providers concern
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