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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Also during that time, Ackal IV’s health turned for the better, which Tol thought was from Nazramin departing Daltigoth with two hundred of his personal retainers to live in a large estate eleven leagues from the city. Not trusting if Nazramin’s leaving was some part of a new plot, Ackal IV had spies planted in the prince’s household, but nothing was discovered.
  

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Also during that time, Ackal IV’s health turned for the better, which Tol thought was because Nazramin left Daltigoth with two hundred personal retainers to live in a large estate eleven leagues from the city. Suspecting that Nazramin’s departure was part of a new plot, Ackal IV planted spies in the prince’s household, but nothing was discovered.

  • Also during that time, Ackal IV’s health turned for the better, which Tol thought was because Nazramin left Daltigoth with two hundred personal retainers to live in a large estate eleven leagues from the city.
  • Suspecting that Nazramin’s departure was part of a new plot, Ackal IV planted spies in the prince’s household, but nothing was discovered.
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Also during that time, Ackal IV’s health turned for the better, which Tol thought was because Nazramin left Daltigoth with two hundred personal retainers to live in a large estate eleven leagues from the city. Suspecting that Nazramin’s departure was part of a new plot, Ackal IV planted spies in the prince’s household, but nothing was discovered.

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