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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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After being placed on the elven throne, Silvanoshei became good friends with his cousin, Kiryn Caladon, and was finally trained in the use of the sword. Soon thereafter, Mina, the prophet of the One God, made her way through the magical shield and into Silvanesti with her army of Dark Knights, and Silvanoshei quickly became ensnared with her looks and fell in love with her.
  

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After being placed on the elven throne, Silvanoshei befriended his cousin, Kiryn Caladon, and was finally trained in the use of the sword. Soon thereafter, Mina, the prophet of the One ***, made her way through the magical shield and into Silvanesti with her army of Dark Knights, and Silvanoshei was soon ensnared by her looks and fell in love.

  • After being placed on the elven throne, Silvanoshei befriended his cousin, Kiryn Caladon, and was finally trained in the use of the sword.
  • Soon thereafter, Mina, the prophet of the One ***, made her way through the magical shield and into Silvanesti with her army of Dark Knights, and Silvanoshei was soon ensnared by her looks and fell in love.
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After being placed on the elven throne, Silvanoshei befriended his cousin, Kiryn Caladon, and was finally trained in the use of the sword. Soon thereafter, Mina, the prophet of the One ***, made her way through the magical shield and into Silvanesti with her army of Dark Knights, and Silvanoshei was soon ensnared by her looks and fell in love.

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