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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Alhana’s affection grew even stronger for Sturm and she allowed the knight to keep her starjewel, but she then went a different way than him. Alhana disappeared from the city, and did not reappear until the main dragonarmy assault had passed. Alhana went to the collapsed inn where Tanis and his companions had hidden during the attack, and used her griffons to rescue the half-elf, the barmaid Tika Waylan, the twin brothers Caramon and Raistlin Majere, and the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind.
  

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Alhana’s affection for Sturm grew even strong er, and she allowed the knight to keep her starjewel, but she then went a different way than he did . She disappeared from the city and did not reappear until the main dragonarmy assault had passed. She went to the collapsed inn where Tanis and his companions had hidden during the attack, and used her griffons to rescue the half-elf, the barmaid Tika Waylan, the twin brothers Caramon and Raistlin Majere, and the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind.

  • Alhana’s affection for Sturm grew even strong er, and she allowed the knight to keep her starjewel, but she then went a different way than he did .
  • She disappeared from the city and did not reappear until the main dragonarmy assault had passed.
  • She went to the collapsed inn where Tanis and his companions had hidden during the attack, and used her griffons to rescue the half-elf, the barmaid Tika Waylan, the twin brothers Caramon and Raistlin Majere, and the plainspeople Goldmoon and Riverwind.
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Alhana’s affection for Sturm grew even stronger, and she allowed the knight to keep her starjewel, but she then went a different way than he did. She disappeared from the city and did not reappear until the main dragonarmy assault had passed. She went to the collapsed inn where Tanis and his companions had hidden during the attack, and used her griffons

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