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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this correctly worded?

The tree’s destruction broke the shield around Silvanesti, which allowed the elves to live without the fear of their life slowly being drained from them.
  

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Seems to be absolutely fine. I would omit the comma in the middle. All the best.

  • Seems to be absolutely fine.
  • I would omit the comma in the middle.
  • All the best.
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Seems to be absolutely fine. I would omit the comma in the middle. All the best.

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